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An indetermined time we spent
In moonlighted space the night had lent
What once was a secret, closely hid
Was revealed to the evening by that which we did
Laying in your warm embrace
My fragile heart increased it's pace
Wrapped up in each other's arms
Although in darkness feared no harm
Solid and real, no illusion
Breaking me from my seclusion
Under starry skies, a soul set free
To be with you as you with me
And at the ending of our flight
The barest whisper, "I love you, goodnight."
©2006-2009 ~PoisonedAcid
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:iconpoisonlock:
:aww::hug:

This poem is awesome, I feel like I can directly connect to the emotions expressed in this work.
Just my :twocents:.

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"We ride with kings on mighty steeds across the Devil's plain..." -Two Kings (The Almighty D)

"Don't fear death. For it is what makes us live."

"You can't find talent with a metal detector."
:iconpoisonedacid:
:hug: I figured you might...not to be assuming or anything though.

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Pretty thing with no head.
That's okay, better off dead.
:iconpoisonlock:
Who woulda guessed! XD

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"We ride with kings on mighty steeds across the Devil's plain..." -Two Kings (The Almighty D)

"Don't fear death. For it is what makes us live."

"You can't find talent with a metal detector."
:iconenigmasphilosophy:
beautiful. its so beautiful...

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~:good and evil do not exist except in the minds of the ignorant:~
:iconenigmasphilosophy:
beautiful. its so beautiful...

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~:good and evil do not exist except in the minds of the ignorant:~
:iconpoisonedacid:
Thanks :D

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Pretty thing with no head.
That's okay, better off dead.
:iconpoisonlock:
Wow, I just keep coming back to this to read it... over and over again. I love it.

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"We ride with kings on mighty steeds across the Devil's plain..." -Two Kings (The Almighty D)

"Don't fear death. For it is what makes us live."

"You can't find talent with a metal detector."
:iconpoisonedacid:
:giggle: You're cute. And thanks :)

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Pretty thing with no head.
That's okay, better off dead.
:iconpoisonlock:
Nah, I just really like this poem!

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"We ride with kings on mighty steeds across the Devil's plain..." -Two Kings (The Almighty D)

"Don't fear death. For it is what makes us live."

"You can't find talent with a metal detector."

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